Hi Bernard, Thank you so much for replying to my latest question on dialogue. Believe me, your replies always contain more than a few nuggets and are very much appreciated. I think one of the secrets to your dialogue and storytelling, in my very humble opinion, is your ability to provide detail/background through dialogue rather than overly long passages of prose. In many ways I think your style can go unnoticed in that it is such an easy style that it doesnt impinge or impede on the story. Its a slight case of less is more (if you get my meaning). Anyway, just wanted to convey my thanks. Willie
You're welcome!