Mr. Cornwell. Thank you for your previous response, it truly helped!, however to see yourself in the situation in which your character sees himself can be a tad difficult at times; you really must close your mind out to everything else in your life it seems!! I wanted to ask another question about writing style when it comes to characters voice. I hope that my question does not go against the legal disclaimer that was mentioned (I would be honored if anything that I wrote appeared in any part of any book you write!) but basically I wrote a line where a French recruiting officer asked people in the crowd if anyone would join the French army, and then he asked a particular random in the crowd if he would join up. Mainly because I knew that they had conscription, but Im sure that they would also love younger recruits (illegal but just the same, happy to have them). The recruiting officer asks you there boy, will you join? and the boy says Might so sir. And then looks to his feet. My question comes here. That line ( the response.. the might so sir) came out just easily as I was typing at my computer, it simply felt like it was a way that a question of that sort would have been answered, but both teacher and student underlined it and wrote question marks around it when peer reviews were issued. When I read the line it seemed like it flowed very well. I have read most of the Sharpes books but have listened to all of them, either way they to flow very well. Is there any way you write differently when it comes to the reading/writing dilemma? I believed they were one in the same until this.. Anyway thank you very much Mr. Cornwell, Vince Kurtz
I like 'might so, sir' - good! You know, this is all instinctive! If it feels right, then it probably is right, and I'm not sure there is any rule or technique (that I know of) which can offer guidance. I think you hear the character's voice in your head and from there it goes through the fingers to the screen - but if you can come up with 'might so, sir', what are you worrying about??