Mr. Cornwell, My name is Vince and I am a senior in college, one of my majors is creative writing. I have read The Sharp Series, The Saxon Stories ( I can not wait for the next one!) and all of the Arthur Books. My favorite series is still the Sharpe series, and for my class, I have elected to spend this semester writing from the other point of view. I have been writing a short story for some time now about a young Frenchman who has joined the ranks, and is now in his artillery training in 1805 ( I want to get him into the battle of Austerlitz). I have been trying to pay attention to detail much the way that you do and I can say that it is No Where as easy to accomplish as you make it seem! My real question is on one aspect of your writing that I seem to have trouble with; that is your ability to make towns, roads, people so gritty. My professor has told me that the flow of my story is fine, the imagery is decent, but with out the grittiness of say the dead dog lying in the street, or the prostitutes calling to the men as they pass that my story feels like a young adult story. How do you consistently get that authentic, dirty, dusty feeling that you are right there, standing in that small Spanish town? Do you go back over each descriptive paragraph and just see little bits that you can add? Any help would be appreciated, I just am having a very tough time getting my minds eye to see these small villages and countrysides in the way that you do. Thank you very much! Vince Kurtz